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mmmm guitar tone is delicious.

that said, your voice is missing a ton of low end, sounds like your singing out of your throat! Your articulation and pitch is a bit unsettling as well.

If I ever get the house alone I'll send you a version of my take on the vocals :)

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

Thank you. the vocals were done over a year ago, with the original instrumental from Killswitch Engage. A studio release. Also, ONLY the first set of vocals has the "phone" filter on them. On purpose. That would account for the dissipated low end. :) Hopefully you listened longer than that. haha.
I've had a lot of training and experience since laying down these vox. :) Could crush these now.

Will add a new version soon, I must also complete the music. Cheers for the review, man.

The vocal manipulation on fat beats can be unsettling and muddies up words,

Fat Beats sounds very nice and full, very effective annunciation in terms of the mix, Teqneek almost sounds high passed lol. Both you could sound literally 100% better with proper vocal processing!

Never been a hip-hop guy, just some constructive thoughts

jesus i love women who can sing, i love how fragile her voice gets on the higher notes.

great catch man!

You've got some of the best stuff on this site keep it up

bassfiddlejones responds:

Thanks man! And yes, she is quite amazing :) I'm a lucky guy.

the mix and production on this is pure gold

Kor-Rune responds:

thanks jp! unfortunately, the project was a huge mess, and incredibly hard to navigate. I'm suuuch a slob.

some parts of the openning higher strings reminded me of this old theme

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mz6wvK UsP6M

spare me the lecture, let the music speak for itself!

BlazingDragon responds:

I do tend to be quite wordy, but I like giving listeners context. Thanks for the review!

not a lot of unifying themes going on, makes a song come off as rather amateur.

the organic kit isnt too appealing to me, the screamy synths were sloppy, sounds like something made with the scream filter in massive with too much resonance.

leady synths come in on and off with melodies that have had no introduction, also rather usnettling. no effects leading in or out of sections also can leave this impression.

the vocal effects were kind of nice, but they need a good dose of reeverb to not come off as cheesy and to blend them into the mix. all the elad synths could use a touch of reeverb for a degree of proffesionality.

i cant say much about the mix, as im practically on laptop speakers atm, the drums seem rather punchy though im without low end so idk.

did you deserve top 8? frankly i dont think so. but i didnt listen to all the songs in the contest. the ones in the top 8 certainly seemed better structured though.

The-iMortal responds:

Thanks for the in-depth review, brother. Actually, that "screamy synth" is not as synth at all - it's a bass guitar with a lot of effects. Experimenting with sound lol

I don't think I deserved top 8 either - I really didn't spend too much time on this. Was really a side project just for the heck of it. Still, I'll have to keep those tips in mind!

spamming near presets on glitch machines isnt gonna create a near appealable bassline, your drums are dry as well, the song has no foru of progression

blargh

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