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Omg beautiful

Moar plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz d00d!)(!

tok a pogint off cuz it duznt l0p wull enuf :PPP

Tasty corn

Got some tasty wubs there, wish i had a sub. But yes that chromatic style is definetly tasty as well as the writing in the intro.

Just a a heads up(i never would take off points for this because i could just turn it down), its kind of loud.

The percussion is the biggest problem, coulda definetly used a little more mids in the kick and the snare a little louder.
But most of this is subject to opinion, good luck in RUNAGDM.

8.5/10

Breed responds:

I had no time to mix it, I pumped this whole track out in about 2 hours haha. Thanks for the nice review though!

Cheers!

nice melody!

can only say the hats could be a little less splashy and more clicky, and the clap could be mixed down a little better(probs a bit more smash to it). Your getting better so fast it makes me happy :).

as always the melodies and writing is delicious.

that is all.

Definetly good!

The bass could be a tad fatter(just a lil), and the kick is good but doesn't really fit the bass well(couldve been fatter as well). Herm maybe even a shifted really heavy clap wouldve fit well? But mainly just something to diversify this track, its the definition of normal/average and (id hate to say it but,) bland(not the best factor for the contest).

Also i dont know who your gonna be paired up against, but this track is pretty minimal(just pads n bass pretty much). So your judge might like or dislike this element. & minimal tracks are in general VERY hard to judge!

But good work either way! Its clear it takes skill to even make this.

im pretty sure,

this gets played when frodo leaves for elf land at the very end of LOTR

JUST SAYING

SuperGoodSound responds:

haha, they stole my idea maybe

hum hum

i dont if ur still makin music, but ill review this i guess :].
well the switch to minor(harmonic?) in the refrain doesnt fit with the song too well, u shoulda kinda just stayed in melodic imo. There are some really delicious parts, such as aroudn the 1 minute mark, writing wise this song is very tasty. U coulda jsut kept the kicks at 4/4s as well.
again everything is my opinion, good luck!

ooh wow

ohh wow that clap just does not fit for serious its horrendous dude no offense. Also you should try a different kick(a more housy, less trancey), a nice heavy 2 or 3 layered one. Thats the main one of the main definitons between trance and progressive house.

Also you while at climax, deviating the chord progression is not a bad idea. Also the bass could have been a little better, you coulda put one of those chunky pluck distortioned basses in htere nicely.

The writing always is awseoem in your songs though! You could easily be in the top FREQUENTLY if u got ur mixng skills up man.

Sick dude :)

mix seem s a little dull in some aspects though, but that could just be the bitrate. All the frquencies seem a lil clogged, boost your high in struments more, and your lows lower. and it could be the kick or some kind of percussion, the sound slike it has a mosquito high pitch feedback lul. But i had to concentrate on it to hear it.
Good luck dude, make good shit.

freakshowmusic responds:

Thanks for the review. You can download it HQ at http://www27.zippyshare.com/v/5041528 2/file.html , it sounds much better.

not entirely house, but a good remix overall

first off, the kick is a pure trance kick lol, for house you need that fat big whopping kick, not the standard trance(sounds like someone swallowing in high speed) kick.
The clap ya got right though, keep it down a little on the hihats also.House bases itself on keeping the kick and clap PROMINENT, but not dominating.

If you just fixed up that kick dude, this track would be so much more deliciosu trust me.

You got the gist of the genre,but its mising thing

Im onbad speakers right now keep in mind, but u can still tell a good mix frombad anyways.

Biggest problems are definetly:
1)lack of bass(electro is rather known for the explosive, almost guitary, semi dubstep bass yknow?)
2)synths are rather original, but not entertaining
3)doesnt make you feel like dancing(the most important thing in an electro song honestly.)

The song layers feel absent, id think its probably the lack of bass causing that. You should definetly sidechain at least one prominent instrument, thats probably the most important thing(along with drums) that make you wanna dance!

You were close dude, but this song wasnt anything special imo. Its nice that you were tryin to make soemthing that sounded different, but the outcome wasnt too tasty. :/

8/10
4/5

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